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can i be honest, I'm so lost even thou I have read the story until I still don't get it entirely but I'm still reading thou. although I'm not a writer but an active reader, I do recommended that this book does get edited , so the story can flow properly ,there are a few previous chapters that have a missing scenes but I suggest you but a header for the location if the characters dependent on where they are in the story so its not so confusing, also is kinda hard to tell which character is speaking sometimes so please note that as well but all in all I wish you the best author as I know its not easy to write a book☺

so far it kinda hard to follow the story because of the errors with how the pronouns are used so its a bit difficult to know who is speaking and there is some repetition of paragraphs, but all in all I really love the story ❤❤

I give up on this couple , this why the say love makes one foolish

what is the use of him apologizing, Sarah must just leave him, I doubt Charles will change😒

I give up on this family

I think so too she must grow a backbone and leave how much must she tolerate until these people decide to kill her maybe , Charles is a useless man , Daniel must be the hidden male lead...that's my 2cents

I'm kinda pissed at Charles, still has no forgiveness from me thou, because kissing your ex as a sign of closure is utter BS🙅 and although he is not completely to be blamed so if he hurts Sarah again, Emma is just annoying me rn, I feel like slapping someone...

hopefully anya gets justice author do you know that the chapter is repeating??

Author they so cute , make them a couple please😍😍♥♥♥