Guessing that you've read more, can you tell me if this story will be the typical 'she the damsel in distress'. Those would have the fl look like she is useless. I'm not into the mafia ones because of that.
ch 26 HOT Topic
Urban · Sofia05
remember to add the dialogue like: "..."
The old patriarch hasn't been here for a few days. I just walked nearby today and thought I might have gone to the wrong place, so I turned back to find the way again. As I get older, I don't know where I'm going when I walk, so I have to go home and find Jimmy to come with me.
Fantasy · ShadiScribe
quick question, does it have harem. it's looking good till now, but am no fan of those. so before gettibg too deep, I'll like to know
That's right, he didn't have a cliché roommate with a mysterious background and could instead move alone, freely.
Fantasy · Zefyr
i just started reading this, I don't like harem tho. so before I get too into the story, can someone enlighten me, does it have harem
'The world is unfair. I'll help you change it, Lux.' Silvanna's eyes burned with passion as she thought of this.
Fantasy · Zefyr
I haven't even started but I already approved. Why? Cause of the 'no harem'. I hate how there is even a need to have the mc pick up girls everywhere he goes. I have no problem with romance in this stories, but it's quite a let down when it turns into a harem. Especially, when I learn of that AFTER I've read 100 chapters. Everything else could be great in a story but the sudden appearance of a genre you don't particularly like ruins the experience. So yeah, I appreciate the heads up.
ch 0 -3 READ THIS FIRST
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Is it a harem? Not looking for those. No offense
ch 0 -1 Character Arts
Fantasy · Zero_writer
You avoided describing, in detail, her initiative to a kiss...changing to his POV there would have been great. Maybe describing her difficulty in managing the newfound ability of hers and doing it slowly with her mate would show the bonding better. And the thoughts of the other pack members when seeing her suddenly power up. You just skimmed through it all. Just an opinion, okay.
ch 35 Vampire King, Cute Sera, and Fluttering Heart
Fantasy · Celeste_18
...their first night and you ain't describing nothing...why author, WHY.
ch 73 Forcing Her to Leave the Movie
Urban · Poisonlily
her mind like, "you for real? Ain't even gonna answer "
Everly gazed at him, and slowly, without uttering a word, she snatched her arm from him.
Fantasy · AngelLily
ugh, locked chapter again, anywhere else I could read this? I can't stop
ch 41 I Dare (Ch.41)
Fantasy · JHeart
with the pain of the accident, I expect barely "We love you"
"Nessa, we are so sorry, grow up to be strong and… never rely on anyone… Mom and dad loves you." Her mother suppressed the urge to cough the blood in her throat out as she lay on the snowy road.
Fantasy · Darkswan
Is she stupid? wouldn't she at least doubt the brother a little I like the royal part of etiquette at the beginning of the story, but I'm not liking her trust decision. I expected her to be more reserved for being in her kind's century old enemy country. I understand her responsibility to her kind on the marriage of convenience, but that shouldn't be an excuse for her idiocy at decision making, on relationship. I mean, logically, if the husband didn't like the brother, she should avoid him, or at least not let him do what he wants for unnecessary pity. I would like her vampire abilities pop up more too. She looks weak, yet is supposed to be trained for the queen position. Not only on work but, describing a fighter too would help.
ch 19 Chapter 19 - Rage
Fantasy · RobinDAce
Ok, it seems she will learned by force about what's she doing wrong by letting him stay. She is definitely empress material, elegant and more. BUT she is supposed to have had some experience interacting before with her princess position and everything, yet it doesn't seem she knows how to set boundaries and say NO. Anyway, wouldn't the normal reaction be backing off? I mean, she sees him as a 'little brother' but is not like she, herself got a relationship with her own brothers, half blood or not. It's just, I have a feeling this stupid decision of her will get unnecessary problems (not actually criticizing author) It just makes me remember a not so happy ending of a another story in which, like her, the fl got r*ped by someone she had a soft spot too, and it was not the ml. ...I got too absorbed in a story that hasn't updated in months huh
ch 12 Chapter 12 - Blooming
Fantasy · RobinDAce
correction.
ch 121 Start of the little plan
Fantasy · Karme
Please don't. I hate when a genre which was not in the description tag suddenly appears in the story when I'm already too deep in it.
"Yeah, it's funny. Though is just some kind of joke. So there's nothing serious in it."
Fantasy · Karme
knowing the author? KNOWING THE AUTHOR?! what do you mean? please tell me it's not true
"Yeah, it's funny. Though is just some kind of joke. So there's nothing serious in it."
Fantasy · Karme
Add the tag next time plis
ch 12 Welcome back
Fantasy · Shink_a
I understand he's been free at last as he describes it but the way he mentions going after his freedom, specifically the going after woman one, its making me think its a harem trope coming which I'm not really into so tell me if I'm wrong
ch 12 Welcome back
Fantasy · Shink_a
right? how along was she again?
Then by instinct, she ran in another direction and rolled over, avoiding another one.
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan