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Guessing that you've read more, can you tell me if this story will be the typical 'she the damsel in distress'. Those would have the fl look like she is useless. I'm not into the mafia ones because of that.

I haven't even started but I already approved. Why? Cause of the 'no harem'. I hate how there is even a need to have the mc pick up girls everywhere he goes. I have no problem with romance in this stories, but it's quite a let down when it turns into a harem. Especially, when I learn of that AFTER I've read 100 chapters. Everything else could be great in a story but the sudden appearance of a genre you don't particularly like ruins the experience. So yeah, I appreciate the heads up.

Is it a harem? Not looking for those. No offense

You avoided describing, in detail, her initiative to a kiss...changing to his POV there would have been great. Maybe describing her difficulty in managing the newfound ability of hers and doing it slowly with her mate would show the bonding better. And the thoughts of the other pack members when seeing her suddenly power up. You just skimmed through it all. Just an opinion, okay.

...their first night and you ain't describing nothing...why author, WHY.

ugh, locked chapter again, anywhere else I could read this? I can't stop

Is she stupid? wouldn't she at least doubt the brother a little I like the royal part of etiquette at the beginning of the story, but I'm not liking her trust decision. I expected her to be more reserved for being in her kind's century old enemy country. I understand her responsibility to her kind on the marriage of convenience, but that shouldn't be an excuse for her idiocy at decision making, on relationship. I mean, logically, if the husband didn't like the brother, she should avoid him, or at least not let him do what he wants for unnecessary pity. I would like her vampire abilities pop up more too. She looks weak, yet is supposed to be trained for the queen position. Not only on work but, describing a fighter too would help.

Are there any other female vampire x werewolf male romance novel? I'm looking for a not so clueless caracters, I'm refering to their knowledge of what they are. A powercouple and strong female lead

Ok, it seems she will learned by force about what's she doing wrong by letting him stay. She is definitely empress material, elegant and more. BUT she is supposed to have had some experience interacting before with her princess position and everything, yet it doesn't seem she knows how to set boundaries and say NO. Anyway, wouldn't the normal reaction be backing off? I mean, she sees him as a 'little brother' but is not like she, herself got a relationship with her own brothers, half blood or not. It's just, I have a feeling this stupid decision of her will get unnecessary problems (not actually criticizing author) It just makes me remember a not so happy ending of a another story in which, like her, the fl got r*ped by someone she had a soft spot too, and it was not the ml. ...I got too absorbed in a story that hasn't updated in months huh

correction.

Add the tag next time plis

I understand he's been free at last as he describes it but the way he mentions going after his freedom, specifically the going after woman one, its making me think its a harem trope coming which I'm not really into so tell me if I'm wrong