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Hey weird idea but could he potentially expand or enlargen his arms or legs like mr fantastasic or mrs marvel that would be interesting to see

Please 🙏 have Maggie as the love interest she by far the hottest girl in the series bar none

Honestly I get cuck energy from the protagonist 😂😂

Devil lance

Crossover I have never seen Teho tenge used before and I’m interested

Sorry I was a little to quick to judge this the opening just felt weird to me but it turned out to be pretty good so keep up the good work

Did you use ai to help you write this and if you did can you please not anymore it reads horribly

What about the method from the curious case of Luther strode

The iron is a Quincy power how did she copy that this plot is getting more and mor ridiculous first the iron doesn’t stop him from feeling pain to suddenly medaka being able to copy powers unique to a special race author I don’t know where you are going with this but so far it is pretty dang bad

What about the iron he has not been using that at all

Luther Strode The Method is a good power choice

Otome dori

Honestly last chapter kinda made Cedric feel weak because of how he handled the sea beast at least to me and kinda ruined the pacing and energy of this

Otome dori

Author why is the protagonist such a weakling like he is literally the son of two of the strongest beings in marvel Odin and the phoenix and yet he is so weak compared to the children of Jean grey who mind you had them with cyclops who is nowhere nere as powerful as Odin like if you wanted to do a weak to strong protagonist why did you make him The child of two of the strongest beings it just doesn’t make sense to me and you say he has a talent for physic spells and yet he can barely lift a rock of the ground after years of hard work it just doesn’t add up to me. I will continue to read I just wanted to air out some of my grievances and problems I had with your story I wish you the best

Why the big nerf author