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Over all, author I like to have you how you can do new things and your story and how is the developed the world Good, it's Pretty good Novice keep going it

Good novel....... Story is also Better than other Fanfic novels also who story going it's Good, i hope author don't drop story also continue to up loud chapters daily

Update the chapter and author It's good novel........Specially Mc character Development and Story...ok I wait for your Updates so please hurry up

Wow......... Wow this going beyond my imagination such good good story author best of luck please continue like this.............you have good creativity

Good continue also try improve writing please, story is good..................go.. Go keep....going👍 ha.... Ha.... Ha.... Ha... Ha.. Ha....

🙂🙂Author It's good novel try update please you should continue story development is also very good, i check every day if updated new chapter...............

I hope you continue your work, Good story I like your work 😊, I already read all your novel. Can also write novel on seven deadly sins please 🙏🙏

I read it many fan pic also many novels so now many mistakes you did. Tray to learn from it please. Thanks you well improve👍😊

Boss each paragraph in story is important step by step make good story but you already wrote something not understandable,

Worst please don't write novel please, ancient one is not God. she magician how also she can predict future by using time Stone can now certain things, like hallo Otherworldly you Reincarnated etc. I don't understand how you wrote like this this make isn't any sense, I now she powerful but this to much I think you should watch more marvel movies also comic any you about good by, and please stop writing