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honestly... at this point the only i want is Misha turn a dark lady and kill Harry, Dumbledore and Ron

honestly, I still don't understand why Misha doesn't ignore Harry like he's doing with her, Misha has a lot more friends, she doesn't need to go after her twin, honestly, since they started Hogwarts, Harry has only gotten close to his twin through the mirror, and that happens at CHRISTMAS, he has passed her olympically since they stepped on the grounds for the first time

what a plot twist, his mother was the enemy since the start!!

Has everyone including Harry forgotten that there is a female Potter at Hogwarts? Except for the Slytherins apparently

thanks for wasting my time with this, i wish i never found this fanfic

try not to always use after each sentence of the characters X said or X said, if you are going to put it in each sentence it can become a bit annoying to read, simply because of the context of the sentence you already know who is speaking, so you can say, murmur, shout, whisper, that kind of thing to know the emphasis that he put on the sentence and of course when he speaks normally you can put said, but if you put it in each sentence as I said before it can become very repetitive and annoying

I have to say that at first I didn't like the story, I don't know why but whenever I read that the MC did something in my mind I thought "cliche, idiot or some other things", but in the last chapters I'm starting to like it a lot more, I don't know if it's me, your writing or what, but I hope you keep it up, because it's one of the few really interesting lol stories around here

I still don't understand why you put rhetorical questions in the middle of the story, honestly the only thing they do is take you out of the immersion of the story more than help