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~Franz Kafka
"I was ashamed of myself when I realized life was a costume party, and I attended with a real face."
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
so Ethan is a larper ...
"No. I wouldn't."
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
slower paced casual slice of life chapters are super important. they lighten the mood, remind everyone what they're fighting for making the action more impactful and break up the monotony of pursuing power. it's the one thing that elevates supreme magus over so many other stories. more authors should do them tbh. they don't have to be constantly but every once in a while they can really elevate a story
This is enough for fanservice chapters. I wasn't in the mood to write fighting scenes after my uncle passed away.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
bonk
She even salivated a little (?) as she looked over him.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
clogged -->coagulated
A drop of blood clogged blood was on the ground; its smell got my attention.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
creep qualities
He was quite handsome, and it was Margareta's hobby to collect the handsome faces in her mind.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
mason is the contractor guy right? so we're not even being subtle anymore lol
"I think it is good." The voice came from Mason, one of the freshmen. His eyes sparkled with excitement, and the expression on his face seemed pleased. "I always wondered how it would feel to see a real historical site."
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Foreshadowing is a narrative device in which a storyteller gives an advance hint of what is to come later in the story
Just when she thought she might be reaching her limit, a welcome surprise arrived in the form of a message from one of her sponsors.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
are both --> both
'Aren't your friends are both close combatants?' He wanted to ask but didn't.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
she was-->he was
After she informed her friend, she immediately followed Irina. As for Astron, she was already ready to leave from the start.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
three-->two
Since her team was defeated, and she sensed it, she needed to concede. It wasn't because she was scared of Irina, but with the other three entering the equation, things might possibly get messy.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
feels like this paragraph is missing a negation
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Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
more riskier -->more risky
'But, this makes things a lot more riskier.'
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
can you elaborate on the authors policy changes as a reader you don't really get to see changes so it's always hard to be fair to the authors and only criticize them for things they can actually influence
I need to leave a review to remind the readers of the chapters in the first volume so that they can be aware of what is to come. I might rewrite them, but with the recent changes in the Authors' Policy, I may not be allowed to; we will see about that.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
should of-->should have
I have reread the novel and noticed that the interactions in the first volume weren't written well. There were a lot of forced dialogues that looked plain stupid, and even I cringed when I read them.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
I'll be real, the academy should fail everyone that engages in such behavior. they won't but they should
'Targets to take their possessions.'
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
you keep saying notes but actually mean grades
"Sigh…You really need to be careful about your notes."
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
funny way to spell congratulate
"Ho? Who is that someone? Should I conjugate you now that you finally found your own way?"
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Irina's -->Sylvie's
Hearing Irina's and Julia's refusal, the orange-haired girl shook her head and didn't say anything more as the group advanced in the academy….
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
cant wait for this mfer to die ngl
"You not only looked at my maid Angel with your lecherous gaze, you also provided discomfort to Miss Amelia. You lustful leech, I should kill you for doing such a heinous crime." Williams' voice was icy as his gaze was full of disgust.
My Muscle System in the Mage World
Fantasy · Aurelius_Imperator