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okay, we deserved that one. well done, slow clap, but do label the chapter with omake or it'll confuse people

And I'm done. This was a horrible story with no sense as it is and the author has decided to go for edgy Slytherin -- cliché and overdone nonsense. Bye.

I like the move to split the twins, so many cliches abound with them being the same person, but this is a nice take on a George who has had a different set of experiences and is maybe suited more to Ravenclaw. Really suits the interesting style that you're using in this story.

Lol any chance of an update,? Yet another story abandoned, classic webnovel....

This is definitely original. I don't know if you've read them but there are some "magic programmer" fics on fanfiction.net that are quite good. Take a look and see if they give you any ideas.

This is kind of lame, since Ron has basically been involved with the Potter series since the beginning. I enjoy a Weasley bashing fic as much as the next one, but it's a sign of an immature mind to take this stuff too seriously. Ron's portrayal in canon is basically as a normal teenage boy who does some quite extraordinary things along the way. If you feel like you hate him, you have read too much fanfiction and should go back and read the books again.

Yeah seriously, call him Zeller or something and redeem this otherwise perfectly decent chapter.

If you put a muggleborn in Slytherin and then expect him to survive like half the idiots on this website, you will have screwed up.

Interesting start, let's hope you stick with this somewhat reclusive attitude. I think it is working well so far.

Not bad, so far so good.

good start, liking it so far.

This is one of the best stories out there. I'd love it if you updated soon.

pathetic. don't post a story without a chapter. plan in advance, write your story and then post it.

you're still a good writer and your basic premise is working out but it's not what it was before.