Barbadana

1yr

Commented

My first time commenting. The setting here is contemporary and I am loving it!

ch 0 1 Chapter One: The beast within

Red INK

Urban · Eucharisthymn

Barbadana

1yr

Commented

Can't wait to see what happens. Lord Sherdan is fuming and I like it!

ch 0 8 Chapter 7: The crowning II

The Era of the New King

Urban · Eucharisthymn

Barbadana

1yr

Commented

Okay!!!😁 Bohan is officially my spirit animal!!

"Hehe!" Bohan grinned. "We will." He patted Mobert's hand with his other free one.

The Era of the New King

Urban · Eucharisthymn

Barbadana

1yr

Commented

Sharma... obviously 😒

Mobert stood closely to his father and whispered, "Who are they waiting for?"

The Era of the New King

Urban · Eucharisthymn

Barbadana

1yr

Posted

Nice imagination! 👌 The build up of characters, interacting with the environment is superb! I can't wait for the next chapters to unfold. Let's see how it goes

The Era of the New King

Urban · Eucharisthymn

Barbadana

1yr

Posted

It isn't bad being my own first fan. Hopefully there will be more people along the way with me on this journey and character build. Apparently, it's in three different parts.

Taste of Death

Sci-fi · Barbadana

Barbadana

3yr

Posted

nice. I love the story line and it's one of the best books I've read so far. I hope to read more chapters when I have passed that can unlock in a jiffy😅