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I highly recommend this novel. It's a unique take on Naurto. The author's knowledge and respect of the original work is rampant throughout the story. An enjoyable read, and something that I will continue to keep an eye on.

Although the story was promising in the beginning, the grammar dropped off immediately. It almost seems as if the work itself is translated? It seems the novel is heavily inspired by the Chinese xuxia novels which love the idea of an overpowered MC, women that easily fall in love with the MC, and face slapping. Perhaps the grammar is obscuring what could have been a decent read. And what I have managed to decipher alludes to a rather unoriginal story.

Absolutely amazing, although there are some similarities to the story 'Black Tech Internet Cafe System' what differs is purpose. The author clearly highlights a purpose for all of the MC's actions. The MC does not introduce something from earth simply because, but introduces an item or concept to further his goal. It's not a new concept but a fresh and unique take on what it means to introduce modern earthly culture to fantasy.

Ah, my appreication for this work has become so much bigger then! Cheers to your accomplished work. I have yet to write something that I am proud of yet, and I just wanted to convey my admiration of your skills

The author's extremely well written. Although his use of common web-novel tropes, (truck-kun, weeb references) increase as the story progresses, the interest is kept alive by how knowledgeable the author is about what he writes about. The college boys sound alive and real, the humor has caused me to laugh without control, and I highly recommend this. It is a book that rises above most of books that appear on this website.

The author commented that the fanfiction is for himself but as he writes, it is apparent that this claim is false. If the fanfiction was for himself, why would he need to explain his story direction mid-chapter? Why is there voting for story direction? The grammar is pretty bad at times, and for a majority of what I read, he refers to the MC, as well MC. Or when he introduces the MC's parents, he does so as MC's dad or MC's mom. And then explains why it would be easier to just call them Mom or Dad instead of MC. All in all, the plot has plenty of potential. But I do believe the author needs to iron how to convey that potential