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Slightly above average Xianxia. Not as good as Dr Gens other works. Suffers from being far too slow to get to the point. The characters are pretty predictable.

A great story overall. One of my favourite ones on the site. Start of the story is really interesting and well written, the character development of the MC and Arza is brilliant as well. Rith and the comics could do with more background but I'm sure thats coming later. Really enjoying it so far

I really enjoyed the first volume but the Long Chen got introduced and I slowly lost interest he is the most cliche one dimensional character I've come across. Then the 3rd volume is unbearably slow to get started. Disappointed it was really promising but after volume one there was a lot of filler that did little to nothing for the story.

Just a really enjoyable novel. The author really shows of their skill for emotional interaction between characters. Noahs mothers death scene is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read. That's where this book excels in the early parts it's really emotive. Later on it gets more gritty and sort of dark but Noah development as a character is 1st class. Once again brilliant read can't recommend it enough.

Poor. What else can I say at least most fanfic add something new or make small changes to the characters in the original. This on the other hand feels like it steals other authors creativity to make a piss poor original story in to something passable. In what good fanfic does the MC kill all the beloved characters off for no other reason other than to "get strong" it come off as a lack off talent on this authors part that he can't make compelling characters so he steals characters from other stories only to kill them off. I just get the feeling this author has a hard on for killing even if it worsen the plot or destroys an semblance of character development.