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As they exited the forest and entered the graveyard of monoliths, they could see floating rocks in the sky with blue crystals embedded in them. The crystals had a very faint tether which faded away as Shiro recognised them to be giant mana crystals that were much bigger than her body. Walking through the graveyard of monoliths, broken statues and bones became common as the statues resembled hooded grim reapers who held a scythe.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy Romance · Reili

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ch 812 Shanghai

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Hahaha! That different POV build-up really had me going for a minute there!

"How can you just write this? Father I am fine, no need to worry" she read out what I wrote.

Astrid - The Hybrid Princess

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That was an incredible arc! Long as he'll, sure, I definitely missed the party but wow this trial was fun. Looking forward to the results!

ch 757 Demi Goddess

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UI Shiro incoming

"What do I think will happen? Let's see… it's going to become very hard to hit her even for powerful queens and gods. The only thing that will limit her then is her body." Nyx grinned.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Shameless Self Review! I'll remove my review once I get some more reviews. I just wanted to say that I would appreciate it if you gave this novel a chance. I poured a lot into the characters and I think they drive the story more than anything. This is my first novel, but I have a lot of passion for the story and I would really like some feedback to improve my writing. Thanks for taking the time to read!

Recollection System: Andromeda Saga

Fantasy Romance · Khazmylar

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Quick! Someone get granny a table!

Hearing that Shiro had used her divinity for a whole day, Lamira couldn't help but feel lightheaded.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Khazmylar

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if she says 'I suppose' one more time, I am totally calling her Beako.

"We're not proper 'humans' I suppose for a lack of a better word. We're the chains of this world. We look after this place and guide the humans along. Those that have the qualities of being a hero are raised up personally by us so that they can fight against the Ancient Terror when he wakes up from his slumber. In other words, we are objects and we cannot obtain the power of the gods." Beril replied while merging some liquids together.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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she has caused weirder situations than this before.

She could stand on him, hit him and even grab him but his body was semi-transparent. It was a rather strange sight but Shiro dismissed it since she's seen weirder situations before.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Khazmylar

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Time to clench those cheeks!

Blocking the arrow, Shiro glanced back and saw a shadow version of herself. It was essentially a silhouette but had a pair of glowing red eyes instead.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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NTS:beat-bet

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Recollection System: Andromeda Saga

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Before anyone asks, yes, Nanomancer reference.

"Yes ma'am! The anus is an exploitable weakness that's usually unguarded, ma'am!" Ai's voice cracked.

Recollection System: Andromeda Saga

Fantasy Romance · Khazmylar

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or rear.

Since she couldn't harm his thick skin, the next best choice was going to be the orifices such as the eyes, nose, ears and mouth.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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RIP minotaur booty.

"Fine I'll fight you." She took a deep breath and prepared herself for a tough fight.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Thanks again for another incredible set of chapters!

ch 666 Lena

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Good idea Dimos, when it comes to Shiro, it helps to just not think about it.

Hearing that Shiro was proficient with quite a few weapons, Dimos just accepted the fact that she could do it. His divinity of wisdom told him that any further thought on the matter would be harmful for his mental state.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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It worked! Awesome! I have a few more coming out over the next couple days while I work. Enjoy!

ch 06 A Shaman and a Sloth

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Fantasy Romance · Khazmylar

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Equipment: [Agony: Longsword Mode | Evolution Type Weapon | STR Based] This blade is said to house the souls of the Old Ones. Once soulbound, this blade will evolve with its user, unlocking more forms and skills. Can absorb the mana of the user to switch forms and use skills. Current Versions: [Longsword Mode | STR Based] [Rapier Mode | DEX Based] Current Skills: N/A] [Prestige Outfit (Female) 1 Armor]