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The book's QD link is down.. could this be riot? If so, they have to calm down, it's not that serious. Great job keep it up

This is refreshing for the eyes, good job translating this beauty.

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I looked it up your profile, and you just seem to be a very chill person, quite rare for me

This is your what? 6th fanfic? Try reading Works from HolyJoker, the guy is a beast! Try his Naruto fanfic it's gold if you dont rush it. I read so many fanfic and novels and this being your "one-of-the-best" made me laugh 🤣🤣

Ok, It's not that bad, but almost nothing make sense, Ninjas are dumb, Nobody care about kid's living alone, not even to rob them, Konoha ninjas just enter Kamegakure like it was nothing, Hanzo is.. that guy is just not Hanzo. Jiraya it is pervert, but not like that. WHY he found Konan so easily? Why killing make he feel nothing, even if he was a "normal" guy? Why KONAN is like that¿¿?? She wasn't like that in the series with the same you-save-me-Iam-loyalty-thing. Why thoughs writing are so scarce? Why he need's somebody loyal to him anyway? W-Wait.. "Dont want power, maybe wealth and came to naruto verse for the girls" a.. HAREM? Hmm, okay you good then, this IS a harem quality fanfic.. [Stopped in the 12 chap]

I read almost half, good to know that it get better, I just can't get through something that I am not liking it to get to the good ones, I even tried to scan the "bad" things but I couldn't keep going. I am REALLY not a person you should get advice from, not a lot of experience in here.. to be honest I don't have the patience to look for specifically the parts that didn't attract me, and I don't care that much to do that. My comments are more like of a note to myself soo.. sorry bro, god bless you xD