Webnovel Author: Green_duckling - Novel Collection

This was ultimately a very good book and I’m super glad I found it. I do think you should weave in a little more doubt about her being in love with the King but other than it I absolutely loved it and am so glad you decided to share it with us ❤️

Writing Quality: 1 star Compared to some of the other books on this site, the grammar isn’t actually that bad but what I do hate is that it’s like they’re having two conversations at once. Like Sidney would say somegthing and then say something else and then Azalea would reply to what he said first and then what he said second. It might just be me but I was really confused reading it. Also there is a chapter just filled with a few repeated paragraphs. Updating Stability: 5 stars It’s completed so I really don’t know but without this 5 star rating the overall rating would only be 1.8 Story Development: 1 star They fell in love just on their first day together, even though Sidney swears he wants to take it slow. Character Design: 2 stars They do a good enough job for Sidney, giving him a personality, background, and describing at least some of his features, but with Azalea, she has no personality and then suddenly becomes flirty, is overly calm about the situation even though she was sober when he proposed and they don’t even describe her features for like 20 episodes but then when they finally do all it is is we find out her hair is ebony black-brown. And she seems heavily uninterested in meeting her parents, which I could understand but she should at least be a little bit hesitant to decline his offer. World Background: 2 stars They do a good enough job about being diverse in the places Sidney and Azalea go but there’s no description about it so when they were walking around the company building I just imagined the most generic thing possible and they don’t even describe the penhouse so it’s just a regular apartment in my mind. Overall Rating: 2.6 stars It could have been better, really, and it isn’t even the story I was promised from the synopsis so I’m heavily disappointed in this book, please author, take this review as creative criticism and polish up the book a bit and change the synopsis :)

Translation Quatlity: 2 stars After a few chapters instead of having actual quotes, it just says ‘"e’ which makes this harder to read. I’ve never been one to care about such mistakes but after a while it gets annoying having to look at it. Updating Stability: 5 stars Saying as the book had already been completed I just handed that a five stars, without it, this rating would only be 2 stars altogether. Story Development: 3 stars I dropped the book relatively early on, so I didn’t get to see much story development, though Aira does talk about her wrongdoings in her first life. Still, I believe Aira should have decided to give Mielle a chance to be her friend by being nice to her first. Character design: 3 stars Again, I dropped the book early on, but the author didn’t tell us how any of the main characters look, she didn’t even explain their personalities you had to catch a whiff of the character. I noticed early on that many people, including me, thought Cain was innocent and liked him at the beginning of the book but he took a 180 turn as soon as we gauged his train of thought. Not to mention Aria supposedly being a 14 year old girl and only reaching the stomach of her 18 year old tutor. World background: 2 stars The author hadn’t yet even discribed the way Aria’s room looked by chapter 8, for the most part, she keeps you distracted in Aira’s scheming but it takes the magic away from the book being in a white space all the time, as the way the author has written it that’s what she makes it seem. The place is only mentioned if it has significant such as the time Aria found and X-shaped/hourglass-shaped piece of glass under the bed sheet, and even then, the bed wasn’t described. My thoughts about this book: Either it’s a poorly written thing or the translations make it this way. Another thing, I can’t bring myself to fully side with Aria and her schemes, some things Mielle might deserve and others are just Aria’s overriding thirst for revenge.