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In my opinion it is a good work since it allows to be hooked easily, the main character has his real character development, he has real reasons why he is powerful. Many people are annoyed that DxD or its main story is not specifically discussed yet but keep in mind that this is a fanfiction and therefore should not follow any canon story or something like that. Personally, I love this story and I like the quality of this author, what I like the least is that the number of chapters that the author gives slows me down, but I understand that the author has his life, his responsibility and his work already that this story is his hobby and the money it raises won't even be enough for him to live decently with this fanfiction.

Author. Why do you take that criticism as negative? The criticism they have given you is constructive criticism and with all the respect in the world they gave it to you. Learn to accept such criticism so that you improve the quality of literary works since writing is not only light but must be taken seriously and committed despite being a hobby. In addition, it is not necessary that one must compulsorily write a book to criticize a person's book. Under what argument full of fallacies is that supported? You do not need to be a book author to be critical, what if you need to have read many books and if what the user stated is true, then you have a long way to go before you are a decent writer, you are still in the range of being mediocre . Good day.

A lousy fanfic, it is not located within the mediocre. If you are looking for a good fanfic, this is not it. The only ones who may like this type of work are people who have not touched serious and well-argued books with an excellent plot behind.

This story is amazing. It is one of the few stories that is quite good compared to most of the material on this website. The only bad thing is the instability of the chapter updates but it is understandable since I am also a writer. I give you a lot of strength and encouragement to please continue the story. Thank you.

Your writing, writing arguments in addition to the logic of it is pretty poor. Please improve that, I couldn't see many chapters because I didn't like it. I gave you the most optimistic rating possible.

For my part, I suggest that the text is not focused or related to the television program since I never liked it. I want your creativity as a writer to appreciate and make an unforgettable path here since it is your own fan fiction and also obviously, that has a lot to do with comics but for people who have not seen comics, try not to throw us such information immediately because On more than one occasion, we do not know what event it refers to or what past that character has but explain it little by little as if you were the creator of that universe. I think this is a good opportunity for you to practice creating totally new books and building the universe it revolves in.