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Author if you want to make a ff with a power that is overpowered then keep it overpowered don't go nerfing it because it just defeats the purpose of using that power. If you want to use a weak version of that power then you should of made something up with god. By saying making the god say it's too powerful in its base form but he's able to give him a weaker version. But anyways I hope you continue writing your story but I'm dropping it on the basis of you nerfing him. Have a good day and goodbye

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MHA: The Sentry

MHA: The Sentry

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Ely_The_Great
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Yes the great world that is just China馃ぃ

Eight years ago, Clark originally He was just an online article writer in another world, China. He lived on a meager remuneration every month. Then suddenly one day he woke up and found that he was in a strange place, and his body had become... A swaddled baby.

Marvel: Starting with the creation of Hydra

Marvel: Starting with the creation of Hydra

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Replied to The_Mayonnaise

That makes a lot more since

I mean, this was no simulation; the system quest was in a real Star Wars world, which meant whatever time I was in had to be in the canon. But the sight of the two in the cantina implied that they were still in Jabba's pay, so I was likely within the events of 'A New Hope, and the timeline was probably around 0 (BBY).

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

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There should have been no suspicion as Flash literally said his name...

Meanwhile I was staring at his victim. I suspected I knew who this was. The dark hair, lithe frame and the lack of fear in his gaze as a Bully held him up against the locker was indication enough.

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

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Ely_The_Great
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what's BBY?

I mean, this was no simulation; the system quest was in a real Star Wars world, which meant whatever time I was in had to be in the canon. But the sight of the two in the cantina implied that they were still in Jabba's pay, so I was likely within the events of 'A New Hope, and the timeline was probably around 0 (BBY).

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

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But that's what he said...

"He said not to let go of our hands," Jacob lied, and for the first time, they both looked at each other, appreciating each other's appearance illuminated by those fake flames.

The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

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if 4 years had passed wouldn't he be 23?

Now at the age of 20, Clark had grown into a strapping young man who was definitely catching the eye of several of the lovely ladies of Smallville which is something his mother brought up. It was never too late to find a nice woman to settle down with. The two were making a run into town for supplies when they noticed everyone gather around a radio for a sudden broadcast from President Roosevelt. The Japanese air force bombed Pearl Harbor Hawaii, killing three thousand Americans, and declaring war on the US which President Roosevelt returned in kind. The US had now joined the second world war.

Superman (Marvel+DC)

Superman (Marvel+DC)

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College was actually affordable back then at least more so than now

Four years passed on and Clark stayed on the farm to help his mother and keep the Kent farm prospering. Martha wanted him to go to college but Clark knew that affording it was going to be difficult and he needed to be on the farm to look after her. He worked the fields, bucked hay, tended to the animals and everything Jonathan taught him. He'd be proud to see him working hard.

Superman (Marvel+DC)

Superman (Marvel+DC)

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Wait.. He's a horse!

I was so hungry, I could eat a horse. Wait, scratch that. That would be cannibalism, but perhaps I could eat an entire boar by myself; however, I didn't fancy my chances if I encountered such a beast. I mean, I was hungry and without any weapons. Come on, let's be real here. Who do you think would be the prey in that situation? Just then, I heard the faint sound of a stream in the distance. My pace quickened as I tried to locate the source of the sound. And after a while, there it was鈥攁 wide river that cut through the woods seamlessly.

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

A JEDI IN WESTEROS

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You don't die right away from your heart being pierce as the brain still has blood in it, but it would of been more accurate to say he died from shock as his body would of shut down from it.

With the sound of metal piercing flesh, Raiga's scream came to a sudden stop. The kunai had pierced his heart, and in that moment, he had completely lost his life.

Naruto: Family System

Naruto: Family System

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Ely_The_Great
Ely_The_Great
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Wasn't Minato Jiraya's Disciple? So why is his wife the same age as his sensei?

"No need, Father. We will go to Konoha," at this time a beautiful girl with red hair entered the meeting hall. She is none other than Kushina.

Uzumaki Fire God

Uzumaki Fire God

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This is the type of MC I want. A logical one who doesn't just kill to be edgey or doesn't kill at all. He is the type to solve the problem the fastest way possible

What am I to do? Make him an Avenger? Hell no. If he goes down the same path his father took, I'll be the same one to reunite him with his dad.

The Vision

The Vision

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Ely_The_Great
Ely_The_Great
Replied to Rigchel

It's tagged as Mark speaking so I assume he is just referring to himself in third person but it could also be missed labeled

"Fine, Pepper. Mark here will be the peacemaker. If we're not going to the hospital, then we won't. Besides, I've put Baymax in the trunk. If there's anything wrong, Baymax will diagnose it, and I'll personally take him to the hospital," Mark interjected.

Marvel: Little Genius

Marvel: Little Genius

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Ely_The_Great
Replied to Rigchel

He was referring to himself in third person...

"Fine, Pepper. Mark here will be the peacemaker. If we're not going to the hospital, then we won't. Besides, I've put Baymax in the trunk. If there's anything wrong, Baymax will diagnose it, and I'll personally take him to the hospital," Mark interjected.

Marvel: Little Genius

Marvel: Little Genius

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Ely_The_Great
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J枚rmungandr the World Serpent?

The Snake shifted in his prison, the prison was wearing down and he knew he would break free.

Percy Jackson : Rewind Time

Percy Jackson : Rewind Time

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