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Has some writing mistakes, but otherwise a nice fanfic, saw some other reviews and it looks to me as if the reviewers just want a copy paste of the dxd plot just with mc instead of issei in it, that'd be my guess. I'd say the author took the time to be original and add his own ideas, big thumbs up for that.

So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it, there are some typing mistakes but it isn't really noticeable and they can be easily ignored. I'd say it's a pretty interesting concept. Hope author doesn't give up on this fanfic, and continues writing. I think it could turn out really good in the future. The author might already be doing this but I will say it anyways, if you aren't sure about how some words are spelt its always fine to google it. All in all has a lot of potential and is a really nice read.

I honestly think you should just write this in your own language, then copy paste into something like deepL, then the translated copy paste would be easier to read and understand. This is one of those fanfics that have worse english than a chinese mtl novel, suffer at your own risk if you decide to read this.

Hello again, as I said in my previous review, if you put effort into the writing mistakes that I would keep reading your fanfic. And I keep to my word and came back to check out your later chapters, and can say that you definitely improved, and put some effort into it and I thank you for that. For anyone reading the 1st few chapters, they are still difficult to read, but the author put in the effort to fix his mistakes in later chapters so far and I believe he will keep it up. I'm deleting my previous review.