you should remove the word actually. This sentence sounds like you're having a conversation with the reader.
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Fantasy · bearateme_
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man, this story got me so hyped that I want to keep reading more. I recommend keep reading. the author did a good job and I'm looking forward to a next chapter.
Urban · Night_Crawler619
he's not done with the mission. he has to upload the video to finish the quest
Level: 19
Fantasy · Drip
I love the story. keep up the great work. I'm still on chapter 1 but I got hooked immediately when reading a couple of paragraphs. I enjoy seeing more novels you create someday.
Fantasy · Toruu
they did that because family name comes first and their first name comes last while kai Carter is a mixed family of both from the refugee and Japanese but Kai family are a little traditional
Kudo Ayaka
Sci-fi · Fixten
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Webnovel
you should remove the word actually. This sentence sounds like you're having a conversation with the reader.
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Fantasy · bearateme_