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Author, you should stop using so many ellipsis (...), it really spoils the reading.

Why not? Are you afraid of being spied on or is it just prejudice against the Chinese?

Author, stop using so many reticences, that's really annoying.

This story is a rainbow that brightens my bitter life.

🤣🤣🤣🤣 Are you afraid to reveal the age of himawari and be guilty, author?

OK... Now I'm sure, this author likes to wear green hat!

Why does the author feel the need to emphasize all the time that the girl is with another guy?!! I think this author has some strange tastes, he likes to wear a green hat. 🐂🐂🐂🐂🐂🐂Muuuuuuuu

The guy willingly delivers his women to other people!!!!!!🐂🐂🐂🐂🐂🐂 Muuuuuuuu

Final points... 😑

I get distressed when they don't put the end point at the end of the paragraphs. It makes me feel like the author doesn't take his novel seriously.

I'm not interested in fat women.

His indifference in the early chapters was legal, but now it's becoming boring.

There's a limit to naivety. That's stupid, he must have some kind of mental problem.

Don't tell me all the girls in this novel are fat?!

Oh, he's cold and calculating. 😮 Would that be Thomas Shelby disciple?

Cliché of arrogant young master. Let's see if there will be other clichés.

Opa, um brasileiro. Bom ver você aqui, amigo. 🙂

I hate phrases like that "because, you might wonder" YOU WHO?!!! It's like he knows he's in a novel, I hate it.

Davis is very easily conquered, just make love once with a woman, who he already falls completely in love with. If you have a woman smart enough is to trap him honey, he'll be on the palms of her hand.