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mc's and his family are so overly cringe to the point its not worth reading when they interact. not to mention they all get dropped into a new world and don't bother with money or information gathering and just assume the mc can and will solve whatever happens.

Bring this back. Bring this back. Bring this back. Bring this back.

Overall it's not bad but it definitely needs some polishing.

what happened to this from 41 chaps to 15?

This is actually a nice departure from normal sci-fi. It feels like it jumps around but it's all tied together. Keep it up author. I'm greatly looking forward to how this develops.

its a great read. all chaps are free and I think its because you can't vote powerstones or golden tickets for it, which is also why I think it's not "popular".

It definitely gets better. I'm up to ch 1430 and there's some good twists along the way so far. I recommend you keep reading. It stays interesting.

Shit review for the excessive amount of so called "chapters" pushing for patron subscribers. The fact that you push this hard for us the subscribe without putting out any work says alot about you. I would rate negatively if I could based on this fact alone.

I don't comment on much of anything on here but, this is truly a great read. My one and only complaint is the slow release time fame for new chapters. Definitely worth the read so far.