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The ff is good but I just hate Acelerator...............................................,.................................,......... . ..... . ..........,................................ .

I hope you can get some mental help.... wish they had system to give negative rating. But seriously you should get some help... ....................

I feel same bro... this is too childish. I'f he did not have the power to do something he could have just given information to Loki or Freya secretly.

I am starting to hate emotion less MC. It pulls all the fun from the fanfictions .............................................................

author ware you working in corporate? why do you use this much formal dialogs in a fanfic?

Its good.... Not my cu of tea. Everyone in this ff is psychopath ,.............,.....,........,...........................,.....,........,........................,.....,........,................

Too much drama.... too much character development and too much filler words... still this is what makes it different from other fanfics I think

The writing quality falls short of expectations. The presence of spelling mistakes, confusing phrases, and poorly structured paragraphs make it challenging to comprehend the intended message. Understanding the content requires significant effort and reflection, which should ideally not be the case. Additionally, the portrayal of different characters lacks depth and distinction, as their personalities all feel nearly identical throughout the story

If the other characters in the story were unaware of the nature of the Qingye's physique, how could the they possess the knowledge that her husband would also acquire such powers? To the best of my knowledge, her unique physique is the only one known to possess that specific property. It seems that in other fanfics, the protagonists may remain carefree due to their possession of a formidable asset, akin to an atom bomb named Jasmine.