馃嚨馃嚟 || demigod | shadowhunter | divergent | potterhead | tribute | grisha | and all the others i forgot to mention
2020-07-20 Joined Philippines
thank you! i'm glad you loved it <3
Allyria woke up to the sound of muffled whispers in the distance.
Fantasy 路 ephemery
Well, old film projectors already existed as early as 1800s. Hehe.
The two of them giggled. But she understood and felt the same sentiment. Who wouldn't? History class is just as boring as watching a bad documentary, she thought.
Fantasy 路 ephemery
Great story! The plot is very intriguing as well as the world background. There are just some things I like to suggest though. Instead of referring to the characters as His/Her Highness [name], you can just opt to mention their first names instead to make it more easy to read. Also, I noticed some redundancy. Searching for synonyms about the same word might help. All in all, the book is already good, just a little editing and it could already line up with the best. Good job and keep writing!
DEADIE
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