T-T very sorry, I will fix it (Altho it might take a few days, I'm sorta lazy and forgetful o(TヘTo)). Thanks for telling me, and for your kindness while writing this. Am very thankful you read and enjoyed *cries with joy*.
ch 0 1 First Day Of My New Life
Teen · _Winston_
Hmm, I don't usually comment on stuff, so ignore this if you want, but this is really interesting. You don't have many mistakes, just make the sentences longer and add a little more detail to them. Your wording could use a little help, but it's good. Keep writing and practicing, just let it flow, when you're done, add more detail, and fix your sentences. You'll get better, that's for sure. Good luck with writing, I would hope you continue, but that is up to you. As I said, good luck and good work.
ch 0 1 That Night
Fantasy · LilLena78
I love that series too! Thank you!
Oops, forgot to delete the 'all' part. It was supposed to be 'a powerful being'. I really need to proofread my stuff, sorry for the inconvenience`(*>﹏<*)′
Reincarnated Into A Girl
Teen · _Winston_