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The mountain pass of Thermopylae where the movie 300 was set. It makes the most sense.

Why active plot armor before its actually needed? It would have been better to dive into the fight, and save it until he feels legitimately threatened .

The pace isn't bad. My frustration is with fluffing your word count with overuse of passive voice and reusing descriptive text 2 to 3 times for each action. The story is great, but the extra, unnecessary description is making us pay twice as much for half the story progression .

I'll second this one. If he can run 2 at full power ,he should be able to run multiple at lower percentages.

Wow, helluva ending to this arc!

Well yeah, but wouldn't he get the same benefit from some other lower profile planets? Much lower risk

It seems like he's forcing engagement with the celestials too soon. I figured he'd try to collect more worlds that he hasn't had a close association with first.

So, was this dropped? I hate getting into a book and updates stopping as it's getting good.

You folks have got to be able to give a more useful comment than "first". Great chapter! I love seeing more of the development of the skill trees. I can't wait to see what happens when he comes across the guider perk in the chaos tree.

Actually, I think you did. I commented before really thinking about it. Since the Supreme laws relate to his impact upon the galaxy, he wouldn't be able to speed it up with time manipulation. Thanks for keeping me honest!

I'm curious why he'd do it in space rather than in the time area in his land.