Thanks! Been working on my writing, it should keep getting better as you read on. Of course by small margins.
ch 20 Roaring Qi
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
Yes, I am thinking about this what do you have in mind?
The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.
ch 0 7 Joining the Battle
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
The first 15 chapters are edited! Try reading it now and let me know how it goes.
ch 0 1 A whole day of Cultivation
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
Yeah, I stopped using that in the later chapters.
ch 0 7 Joining the Battle
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
I noticed it and stopped doing that, will edit the previous chapters soon!
ch 0 1 A whole day of Cultivation
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
Yes, I noticed this and I stop it in later chapters. I will go back and edit the previous chapters when I get some time.
ch 0 7 Joining the Battle
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
When someone shows kindness to you, you show kindness to others!
He resolved to take care of her until she was conscious and able to take care of herself. And then, he would send her on her way. It was the least he could do to repay her for the kindness that the old man had shown him all those years ago.
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
I can't find it dude. Ri Se of a star is that it?
ch 0 1 A whole day of Cultivation
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix
I try my best to keep you happy!
How about your power stones if it stays as great as now?
I am trying to write something I will enjoy reading as well!
50 chapters will be in no time, hope to hear from you again!
It's great that you are enjoying it!
He is only 15 right now let the dude grow up and learn his way around the world. Romance and his values will slowly be developed.
As he ate, he couldn't help but think about the path ahead. Cultivation was a difficult and treacherous journey, and he knew he had a long way to go before he could truly consider himself a master. But he was determined to persevere, no matter how many obstacles he faced.
Baptism of Blood
Fantasy · DragonPhoenix