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I'd prefer longer chapters
ch 190 Individual Teaching II
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
A smoother transition to introducing the arrival of the ork chief and the route would have been nice.I don't recall them arriving and surrounding the others before fighting. They just all the sudden were there? Before? Did I miss something?
The Orc chief launched a Qi attack, exuding a powerful force that threatened to tear everything apart.
The Golem Mage
War · mystic dark
detection range
It provided him with ample hiding spots to launch his attacks and facilitated his ability to quickly locate his enemies thanks to an advantageous Golem like Legion who had a detention range of a hundred meters.
The Golem Mage
War · mystic dark
twice in a row.
However, now that it was restrained, it acknowledged Alec's presence, as only Alec had been able to read his attacks twice in a role
The Golem Mage
War · mystic dark
starting with this paragraph this chapter repeated multiple paragraphs from the start of the chapter..... please fix this.
"But why, my Prince?, Why did you let him go?, And why aren't you showing any anger towards his companion who is still here?"
The Golem Mage
War · mystic dark
besides repeating entire paragraphs word for word and having to understand very roughly translated to English version this book is wonderful .
ch 210 The Academy Becomes Aware (1).
The Golem Mage
War · mystic dark
interesting that Camille was the princess' name and the one legged streamer was victoria...you managed to remember for a couple sentences then revert to forgetting these details
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Building a Gaming Empire From Scratch
Urban · Zoo of Darwin
great start... kinda rough when stuff gets repeated as space filler or constant explanation regarding the jobless negative and why people are so worried about him because of it... it gets a lot smoother as you read and it is a good read. I'll give some power stones. looking forward to seeing where this story goes 🫵👍
ch 40 Counter Magic, Magical Means Failed!
Worldwide Class Change: With No Class, I Become Stronger Whenever I Enter The Abyss
Games · Dungeon King
her to follow
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Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
Fantasy · xlntz
these status updates should only exist when a change occurs that the reader needs to be aware of. not used as chapter filler.
Magic Skills: Integral Skill [Appraisal] (Rank C) | Additional Skills: [Lung Master] (Rank D), [Status Modification] (Rank SSS+), [Enhanced Stamina] (Rank B), [Poison Resistance] (Rank C), [Magic Detect] (Rank A), [Element Merger] (Rank B), [Mana Pressure] (Rank A), [Night Vision] (Rank C), [Enhanced Vision] (Rank C), [Enhanced Olfaction] (Rank C) | Unique Skills: [Beginner's Luck] | Curse Skill: [Fire Demon's Curse].
Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess
Fantasy · Pendulum_
thought it said his hp was 200k in the last chapter or 2?
Health: 125,390
The Legendary Mechanic
Games · Qi Peijia
Eli Ely Elu Elo seriously 😐
then specify that somewhere you know like: the people began to call him Daren wich means great one. all you do when you toss the name in there it confuses people like how Jesse gets called Jose constantly names are wrong and even he she like the author couldn't decide on parts of the book like Erwin becomes Ivan females get "he looked into the distance" instead of "she looked into the distance" if you are too lazy to read your own books hire a damn editor!
Although they didn't understand why Daren would appear here, no matter what, they were saved.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
Grimm's
"That's gray Mage Tower!"
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
used to be grimes tower now it's gray? stick with Grimm please
"Are you related to Gray?" This time, Eli asked directly.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
I'd pay 2 passes or equivalent coin for chapters 2.5x longer
ch 190 Individual Teaching II
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain