From Manila. And like you, a frustrated writer trying to get reviews for your stories. I mean, we all need opinions to improve, right?
2020-07-23 Joined Global
This is getting good.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Realistic · Jacket_Josh
I agree with the comments for this chapter. I need to proofread my work, and be descriptive simply enough.
ch 0 3 Dirt from Dirt Part 2
War · ArkAnghel
That’s some great world building.
ch 0 2 Dirt from Dirt Part 1
War · ArkAnghel
I can never write as magical as this first paragraph of the second chapter
Her ghostly features shined, the sun tugged exhibiting her beauty despite the old rags hugging her, the clinking coins of gold clinging her chest. Swam of people rustled screaming and yelling through the guard's armor-plated shields of silver which barriers the rich from the poor. Mournful cries echoed the thick air which whispered and swayed the trees to and fro. Her dirty cloak concealed her beauty. She gulped dashing through the streets for life, a skeleton figure blocked her way, eyes blanked, bald head held high and exotic features, "Maddox" she whispered before her orbs darkened doubtless she was lost in another world.
Sci-fi · shaznalye06
This is getting interesting.
ch 0 7 Back Home Part - 2
LOVE ME HARDER, MR. FU
Urban · Xia_Xia89