JustSmileAndWave - Profile

Amazing story. Character development is realistic, the story progresses at a steady speed(the cliffhangers hurt), updates are pretty regular, and the world crafting is immaculate. I like to write sometimes, so I often find myself in awe at how seemingly effortlessly the author depicts scenes and emotions. The story noticeably takes inspiration from H.P. Lovecraft, and everything is perfectly placed together.Overall, very nice 👍

Bad review. Reviewer fails to understand that you can still be cunning while not completely unfeeling, and understand where the character development gets its direction. Over time, Sunny finds more things that matter to him, and therefore is more restricted in what he does. Honestly, wanting a main character that just manipulates everybody and doesn't have any loved ones is kinda sad. Also, Sunny knew the seemingly innocent people weren't.(Sunny is also still fighting against the spell and his fate as a slave. It's not that easy to destroy an almost omnipotent being, and he doesn't want to kill Nephis.)

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