very nice to read.... but wtf is his weird reaction to finding out his sister is a demon?? the next thing she's in a collar? TF?
don't you dare drop................. nice story
started off nice and promising... at this point, it's just nonsense.
the most stupid DC fanfiction i have ever come across... a chinese one is 10X better than this shit. you come back from the dead, and the next thing the whole of Gotham knows you are a metahuman. TF??! his power itself is a very cool and OP one, without it being over the top. but your story development is 😑
giving 5 stars, hoping you continue. the synopsis sounds interesting.
WTF??.... bro, if u tired and fed up with writing, just say it and quit. the prison arc was so unnecessary, and then we have Louise getting with him? bro, if u wanna write a pure smut fic, just say it.
Read till the latest chapter and WTF is wrong with the MC? 150+ chapters, and the story hasn't seen any major development, just unnecessary scenarios and information.
another review 🙃.....still okay to read and all. but its 70+ chapters now, and the MC's character isn't even developing. still thinks and acts like an idiot sometimes.
nice story and all buh what's ur fascination with putting your MCs with whores?
I seriously and sincerely dont know wtf I am reading... who is the MC? no intro about his background... first 10 chapters was pure smut, then the next thing building on fire. then suddenly he's a supernatural? TF? I don't know if the story is even good, cause it's confusing.