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thanks for the chap, cant wait to see how he will break his phisical limits, congrats author this time around everything is much more planned and explained in detail. Last time was good, but this time is amazing so far, keep up the good work

I get it, thanks for all the answers, the first 2 i thought that it was what he wanted, but just to confirm. Now things are clearer. Im just going nuts waiting for the rest, thats how good your writing is, just congrats again and again

Thanks for the chap, author. I liked that you put a reason for the black uniform woman to choose a key fragment. It's just worrying that shw will know where Kai is, right? I dont know if this is a big problem, BUT, what will stop her from going after him in the forest ow something like that? Another thing: Each wave has about how many Ascenders? 500 milions right? Thats a lot of people, all of them are in the same city in the Tutorial with the same missions? If someone choose the Hard difficult for some reason, just 1 can kill the bosses right? So just one can pass the tutorial? If they are divided in different citys with different missions what ensure that the 3° key fragment will be in the same Tutorial that Kai?

Awesome chap as always, author, congrats. Lets see our Kai climbing

Thx for the chap, author. Well written and paced as ever. All the prologue was good and showed what we need, a good backstory, motovations, the whys, whos and whens.

Thanks for the hard and good work. It was a nice chap, and i know things will go wrong, but i just cant see how, its well made author, congrats

Now that i catch up. First, thanks and congrats for the hard and good work author. Second i liked this story overall, its well writen, it has good characters, and it make us want to know what is going to happen. This thing about hiding the true power is not my cup of tea, but if it has a good motivation and a time expiration to the hiding, i can accept. But the thing about the organization hunting systens, it just didnt add anything good to the story, until now at least. I liked all the familiar drama, and i wished it could be better used, with his mother a discussion in the early chapters, both of them yelling, crying, Ralph getting his red eyes and everything. In this fight with Rin the same, something were both slam their feelings and thoughts on another. But i guess that this we still can wait for a better development, but the organization, imo, shouldnt exists.

I wanted something more intense, i dont know, maybe some truth in her face. Like him "losing" control, his eyes turning red, some yelling about how he just wanted a good mom, how he get stronger just to get attention and after all, he got a limiter because of her. I guess that all this drama is important but it could be showed to us with a discussion between him and his mother, instead he just explaning half hearted to the System.

Nice restart, cant wait to read the rest again

Nice, gonna read right away. Thanks for the hard work, in this novel and in Super Necromancer, i enjoied a lot both

i didnt get It. U post It as a new novel with the same name ?

I liked, it was well written and paced. I just feel that Valera story could be telled in another way, piece by piece, in some talking with Dynamite Girl or something like that. She telling that to someone who already know it, in the middle of a confessation… It wasnt bad, but it looked artificial for me. But after that was good, natural, with a nice flow

Author, the story is awesome as always. imo, action shouldnt be the central focus, i prefer to see all strategie, schemes, and plans. What Aldrich'll do? What is hes final go? How he'll get in there? I think this is more important than fights. Youre going prety well balancing these two aspects, and you can continue in this pace. thanks for the chap and congrats for the hard work.

Chills all over my body, this chap was worth all the prep before, Very well done, Congrats for the nice chap

Thanks and congrats for the chap. Nice reference to Father Whitebeard. This tension is awesome, Shrimp is coming, probably many will die, and Aldrich will come to save the day, nice. I hope that Mel stays okay, Adrich should have more companions like Casimir, who has free will and then can helps Aldrich where he is lacking.