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I don't blame you.

Re read chapter 5. The author says it's a metaphor for when a student learns techniques in the academy. Being able to use it thus unlocking the Chakra.

Do not read Inces pedophila Mc is naruto and author writes s scene with him and his little daughter. I hope some people can see this between all the bot 5 star review spam

The characters are stereotypical the grammar is awful and hard to read the novel has only 20 chapters so far though so I'm unsure if they will improve. because of how awful the English is it makes some scenes just cringey for example the Mc said to taunt someone "deliver my love to your mother he can't help support her child." Then he responded with I am the only sibling in my family you should check to know what to say. ??? this is just bad. because of how many 5 star reviews this has on top of the power chart and how few chapters this has im almost 100% sure this author has some bots to blow up the novel.

The chapters are incredibly short while it has 49 chapters each chapter could be read in maybe 20 seconds or so Huge turn-off. ............

The novel is just sad to read. Novels like these make me wonder how they end up this high on the rankings. Why do some actually good reads end up not even making it hmm weird.

If you the author bring something up that is important or delve into a character it's your job to provide an ounce of context but you did not you had the mc go off on his little expedition through the city showcasing his stupidity with his fans who seem to be remembering the mc raping a important character that wasnt explained how he isn't locked up isn't explained. In short for example if a mc of another book starts to somehow start flying you don't explain how he did it 4 chapters in the future. if you bring up a major conflict that is important to the setting and the previous owner body you don't have him go fix the problem then explain the problrm. That and the horrible dialogue is what prompted my review if you don't grasp that that why I said your out fo your mind

This novel is just awful I imagine the other reviews are fake they have to be. The start of the novel is meh is not horrible but all the chapters after is just cringey. Imagine the classic Chinese trope of the young master 3x that plus it's how everyone talks and the mc/author is out of their mind. The mc body old owner did a huge crime. Which wasn't explained why or who or when or anything Just oh this happened. Not even 3 chapters in and there are so many plot holes. Don't read this trust me. common sense is nowhere In this novel.

The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"

The mc is a h-anime protag only read if you like that stuff. The writing quality is above average the characters feel alive like to some degre. this is imo though it is something to read.

I don't think I said anything about tenten more of just story plot and stuff? so beyond that I said his sound abilities you gave him should be quite impossible realistically which some readers won't like. It is a fan fiction so you can make his sound do whatever you want. I'm just pointing this out for others.

The in inuzuka clan is not a noble as far as I know there are 4 noble clans which the inuzuka clan is not apart of I can't find anyone who says otherwise other than you. As for rating the clan myself I think it's ok nothing impressive decent tracking and that's about it.

Concept was good. System wasn't implemented well felt very strange. He somehow knows things he shouldn't like spoilers, if he fuses sound waves into his leg he should be somehow 3-4 times faster? hardly if not no character development whatsoever so far for the mc. The author doesn't care to share his backstory or write action scenes in the exams unless he feels like it. spoilers! Author thinks that Kiba's clan is a noble clan which isn't true so i doubt the authors knowledge of the story. high potential certainly But ruined it very quickly. The author says his sound waves can do things quite impossible like somehow being able to use his sound abilities to turn all energy into sound? I wonder if the reviews actually read the novel not just fan girling over the idea of it which Again is a Interesting concept. Overall not worth reading unless the author edits his novel and fixes it. To author--if you want suggestions The biggest improvement you could make is to stop skipping over your own story like at very beginning where the mc just exists and just oh guess I'm here now and it goes from there not interesting at all. Though if fixed would definitely have a chance to be a solid fan fic. Sorry for long review just felt like sharing my thoughts.

The story is not bad however the English is difficult to read. I was forced to correct the paragraphs in my head to read it. The system makes no sense as well and could be easily improved for example adding some info dumps explaining it would be a life saver. as the book is now I advise you not to read it until someone edits the book to make it easier to understand.