That's nice.
Will Claude's love interest stay the same? I really want them to stay the same.
Also the character interaction feels a lot more natural.
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Please do republish it. The starting is much better than your previous novel. It shows that you have improved.
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I really like the novel. But I want the MC to go through a situation similar to Yami and reach a climax which will also deepen the relationship between the MC as it has already been more than 100 chapters. And also probably a mental breakdown and power up...like forcefully awakening a unique element something so unique that no one has thought about. Also, Will the MC be a necessary evil like Eren and Lucas from "I will kill the author" who will do pretty much anything for the betterment of the world and his people. If you watched AOT you would already know what Eren did. And as for Lucas, he let a child die that made him question himself but managed to convince himself that it was necessary.
Please continue this.
Tf. That's only the prologue?!
Threaten*
'Maybe I can use the food to threat her later. Just to be safe'
Fantasy · Semo_1
You should use "The" before "One"
Black stone walls, with crimson roof tops, stretched high above the sky, the Blood Tower was one and only symbol of the Liora Kingdom.
Fantasy · itsron
You should be confused about Liyana. She didn't even have sex.
How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game
Fantasy · MCPG