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This is good! Grammar is perfect and the story is wholesome and fun. I like how involved his parents are in this story when usually in other stories, they are just there for the sake of it or just killed of or never there in the first place. The characters are great both mc and others, I love the relationship between him and his friend! While he has a system, most of the things he gets feels earned and I love how you didn’t just gloss over the arm injury or just outright time skipped it either and how things don’t always go the mc’s way. The characters actually develop which is rare on this site and overall, 5/5 nothing to fault, I finished 94 or so chapters in under 5 hours

I take back a lot of what I said, the characters got wayyyy better, like a lot better, their dialogue seems a lot more natural and their development is good as well, for the romance, I still feel the same about Alicia but Esme was written so well man, it feels like she is the only one mc can fully be himself and feel comfortable around in and the building of their reltionship is a lot more gradual and natural, platonic or not. I wouldn’t say much about the world building but the plot definitely became more interesting. Overall, this definitely became wayyyy better than I imagine and team Esme all the way!!

Pretty good, grammar is excellent, but the romance in this honestly isn’t good, at least at the point I’m at right now, it felt super forced and pretty cringe, not in the sweet giddy good way but I know that this is not a romance novel which is why I’ll still give it 4 stars. World building is okay, plot is interesting but the characters feel pretty shallow and I struggle to unferstand why they do what they do sometimes especially the mc but that can improve in the future as we get to know them more, I hope. Overall, a promising novel and I will continue to read it.

I have a question, would this be romance? Don’t mind it or anything but atleast I would like to start reading this knowing what to expect

This is good, wayyyyy better than expected tbh. As of where I am now, at chapter 50, the story has been pretty darn entertaining. Its like re zero mixed with mystery detective stuff with a touch of cthulhu and romance excecuted pretty darn well, the story is good with a lot of clever twists, characters are good, the mc is smart but does not outwit everyone all the time and he actually struggles, most if the time having to utilize every card he has and he actually feels human. The heroines are terrifying, this is a REAL fucking yandere, the first arc with Luna scared me quite a bit. All in all, I did not expect it to be this good and I will continue reading.