A great start to a great story! the characters are witty and likeable and the world building is very detailed and thought-out. There is noticable improvement in writing style as the story progresses showing the authors adaptability. Lots of potential here, cant wait for more chapters!
Eastern · LRWJONES
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A great start to a great story! the characters are witty and likeable and the world building is very detailed and thought-out. There is noticable improvement in writing style as the story progresses showing the authors adaptability. Lots of potential here, cant wait for more chapters!
awaiting finished work
Eastern · LRWJONES