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Sadly, I did not enjoy this book as some commenters/readers did. I enjoyed maybe only about 20% of this book. Chapters 1-20 (possibly) were okay but somewhere down the line, this book began to drag on and on and on! I did a huge sigh of relief when it was finally over. I was trying my best to finish this book that I started more than a year and half ago. I think, if this book was less about the political agenda that V and Jack experienced and more about their struggled relationship, this story would have kept my interest. It was a book less about romance between the two and more about righting some injustice. The grammar and sentence structure was hard for me to overlook at times.
ch 100 Chapter 100: Time Of Our Lives
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Not sure how Jack got out of being surrounded by the other wolves. I guess they just gave up seeing that he had a force field around him.
“Lance, Jack! Come here, I will use the shield on us.” she yelled, and it was a good thing she was still in her human forms, otherwise she couldn’t communicate with such details.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
I wonder as to how they would get lost if they are wolves with a great sense of smell. I think there are some key elements in this book that may be lacking and disconnected from the reality of true wolves.
“Good. So, Morgana will guide us with a ball of light through the forest. This ball will show us the way and also enlighten the path. Everyone stay close so no one gets lost.”
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
It may be just me but, I think this celebration could have waited until Lance proved himself worthy of their trust. I don't believe Lance is a bad guy under all these circumstances but things are revealed with time.
ch 84 Chapter 84: Making Peace
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Hopefully, Lucinda and Lance are not conspiring against Vi, making it seem as if they are mates for the purpose of getting Lance into the palace for evil intent!
It was really weird to be in the middle of a very intimate moment, even though she could never imagine that something like that would happen.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Yeah, tired of that mate he was paired with!
He looked tired.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Once again, she is putting him on a GUILT TRIP for not agreeing and going along with her foolishness!
Jack didn’t seem to be happy about it either.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
He is RIGHT!!!
“I trust you, Violet. I’ve said that a thousand times. But the last time, I trusted your instincts and you almost died. I don’t know what else you want from me. And don’t threaten me with this marriage talk. I’m always being the one giving in to everything you ask me. And what do I get in return? More concerns.”
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Again, how do you know there was an AMBUSH, if you yourself was badly beaten and wounded!!!! SKETCHY…
I’ll understand if you don’t want to see me though. But I really didn’t have anything to do with the ambush.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Why would he mention her thinking he set a trap for her…while he is hoping she wasn’t her too 🤷🏽♀️ Makes me think he already knew something…so he is not going to tell he where to meet so she can’t tell anyone where she will be in case she needs help!!!!
I’m hiding somewhere else, and I don’t want to put you in danger, but I can’t stop thinking if something bad also happened to you.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
It is more than a possibility and I’m not sure why this surprises her.
“Do you really think Arden has a spy here?” Violet asked still in disbelief.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Yes, totally selfish and on her own power trip. She doesn’t want to be controlled so badly that she is ignorantly placing herself in harms way and expecting Jack to be okay with her poor decision making skills.
“It's hard to understand that when he tries to control me every time.” Violet complained. “I don’t need people telling me what to do anymore. He knows what I’ve been through. He should be the first to support me.”
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Or else he’ll drink himself into a frenzy!
He was blind with fury, and she wouldn’t push him harder for now.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
I thought she was gonna keep her mouth closed 😑🤦🏾♀️ Where is my duct tape!
“Don't you think he could also be ambushed like me? He wasn’t there, maybe they took him as well…” she suggested, but Jack got up immediately.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
He is just as dumb as she is and a drunk!
“I’m sorry… I really thought I was going to lose you this time.” he said with sad eyes.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Homegirl is dumb…stupid…ignorant…and foolish. I know V wants to trust Lance easily and Lance may not be guilty of any wrongdoing but, that doesn’t mean you take your life so carelessly when danger and threats were promised! At least take someone with you if not your mate just to watch your back. I don’t feel sorry for her at all and once again, she is an IDIOT!!!
ch 72 Chapter 72: Tricked
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra
Too wordy and the grammar is problematic. It's not for me!
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
The Alpha's Alyne
Fantasy · mmhearts3101
Some of these sentence structures are reading way too long...I think I might pass on this book from that standpoint alone.
We all enjoyed the movie, it was a hell of a comedy movie and we were tired of laughing our lungs out. And now we had to decide, where were we to go for dinner. It was 5 pm now and we still had a few hours before our curfew would end, so I suggested that we go to the sushi restaurant at the city outskirts, and everyone accepted except Alex because he said ‘it was too dangerous at that side of the city. This sushi has always been my favorite because they serve the most tastiest salmon sushi in the world. Literally, no kidding. And Alex was skeptical about going to this place because the Alpha and the would-be Alpha, the irritating Asher had strictly asked us to not go near the city outskirts late at night because of the looming dangers outside, away from the pack. But I wanted to go there and the best way to make Alex agree was to give him puppy faces and Brianna did exactly that. And voila, Alex agreed but said that we should leave by 7 pm and I was okay with that. I never thought making Alex agree would be so easy but I guess that is what mates are for, they just can make you do anything, anytime. And soon we left for the restaurant, me in my car and Peter and Brianna with their mates in their respective vehicles.
The Alpha's Alyne
Fantasy · mmhearts3101
Sadly, I did not enjoy this book as some commenters/readers did. I enjoyed maybe only about 20% of this book. Chapters 1-20 (possibly) were okay but somewhere down the line, this book began to drag on and on and on! I did a huge sigh of relief when it was finally over. I was trying my best to finish this book that I started more than a year and half ago. I think, if this book was less about the political agenda that V and Jack experienced and more about their struggled relationship, this story would have kept my interest. It was a book less about romance between the two and more about righting some injustice. The grammar and sentence structure was hard for me to overlook at times.
The Alpha's Prisoner
Fantasy · Rafaella Dutra