The thing about writing is that it opens up your mind to new made-up worlds, and the thing about reading is that it helps you escape the real one.
2020-07-29 Joined Indonesia
Fatal injury insinuates that the victim is dead so maybe don’t use ‘fatal’? 😳 just a suggestion! 🧡
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Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
Love this sentence! 🧡
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Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
Continued* 🥰
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Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
Had*
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Urban · Aciee_GelaTin
What a king 😂 tha’s all he says at the beginning of a ceremony?
"Today I gather us to celebrate my daughter's wedding to the prince of the Decresh," Father spoke once everyone was seated. He raised his golden wine cup, "Let the ceremony begin, and enjoy yourselves."
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
faces* [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · JasmineJosef
Yes, that’s why she’s kind of the main protagonist here.
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Sci-fi · krydwen
Is your story past tense or present? I see some inconsistency with the next paragraph 😊
A beautiful figure walks down the red-carpeted hallway, with marbled walls that have extravagant designs. Paintings with frames that are made of gold, and doors that are heavily refined.
Fantasy · LittolSol
I really like this description of her. It shows her true beauty very much.
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Fantasy · LittolSol
Thank you so much! 🧡🥺
Black In the Water
Sci-fi · krydwen