Draconicus38 - Profile

I'm actively reading your story and wanted the exp for reviewing a book. I've spent quite a few power stones because it's very good.(currently at chapter 252)

I agree with what some of the other readers have said. Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members. Some of that gets resolved in later chapters. One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc. I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.

I just started reading this story. 1- I don't know the update schedule so I gave it a neutral rating. 2- writing quality...I found that the author did not separate paragraphs very often. English over all was decent enough that you could understand and actually picture what the author intended. It did not have very many if at all punctuation errors so that's a plus. Over all pretty good

Hi, there. I've read every chapter of this story and frankly, I'd like you to continue it or allow me to help you continue it. I have a few ideas for this story already, but seeing as it is not my work, I would be infringing on your rights as the author if I did anything like that. I'd like to get in contact with you to possibly help or make a sequel. Thanks for taking the time to read this.