Constructive criticism: if you're worried about triggering people you can do one of several things: - provide trigger warnings either before or in chapter - avoid describing the events from the view of the victim - avoid showing the event in process, show a before/after series That's all
ch 38 IMPORTANT QUESTION
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"You deviant," Nao snickered, returning to the room with Aurelia, both of them having changed into fresh clothes, Aurelia's typical bodice visible under short shorts and a tank top, Nao wearing a casual sweater with leggings. "What are you, a demon straight from hell~?"
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I think they meant by title, not image.
*hug* Good chapter! Sorry I forgot to read it sooner with all the hub bub going on around here lately, what with my move and all, it slipped my mind that I wasn't caught up. Anyhow, yes, yes, very good and wholesome. I'm quite looking forward to what comes next :)
ch 35 Reincarnated as a Dad- and the wrong Species?!
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OMG, lol. What a card!
"Respect women I must, acquire true daddy I also must!!" Nodding, Aerendyl laughed and turned, shirtless as always but oddly sweaty. Not the sort of sweat that appears broken for display, but rather a genuine one of hard work, matched by blonde curls hanging lank with sweat.
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That's... 🤔
ch 34 Thorn of Sweet Flora
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A good wish, a well deserving one
"Yes, definitely..." The Summoned Hero yawned, slowly getting to her feet. She felt the same, as said... just strong, rested, ready to tackle the day. Already diagnosed with post-traumatic stress disorder on Earth, her only wish was to... be mentally healed? To let to of the past and live freely of such shackles, was that it? If so, she'd definitely gotten that wish, at least as far as one could tell by the easy bliss in her mind now- but what a wish, for her to not realize what it was even when the pleasure knocked her unconscious. Only to be healthy, to have a whole mind in one piece again... it was a nice wish, Hina thought with a self-derisive smirk.
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Much sadness...
"Quit, yes... you, Hina, you know pain. Your mother... cut your face open, as a child. Broke your leg, hurt you, maimed your spirit... she tried to murder you, again, and again... until blood flowed as heavily as your tears... then worse, and faster... yet, you came here, to this other world, because through... hell, you would not break. Because your spirit was... strong enough to be given a second chance... not for the usual reason... while some burn hot with their desire to prove something... you burned with the desire not to fall, and die... Worry not- there is no trap, only talk."
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heh
"Is that a fact? I have saved many children, but only one left afterward, so I know the one... this makes you Hina, does it... not...? The slayer of knights, the hero of Lop, the shining blade, the... slightly too sexy angel, she said...?" Hina paused, nodding.
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a paid of skeletal monsters and a clawmore?
"Alright, then, why don't I go first?" Diavel smiled and drew a steel broadsword, headed toward a nearby door. Trevon grinned and nodded, at which Diavel slid through the door with his new companions on his heels. Karasu watched as, immediately, a paid of skeletal monsters that reminded him of the Norse Draugr myth came down. One carried a clawmore, and the other a heavy mace that looked like it could crush through Diavel's skull with little to no effort.
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Flag... flagggg!!
"Actually, I'm married!" the blue haired gentleman smiled brightly, and Karasu felt his jaw slacken just a bit. "My wife didn't enter the game with me... so I'm determined to get through this game and return to my family! When I heard that somebody was demanding against all odds that nobody die, of course I had to come and join up... that's the real reason I came to ask about joining the party, by the way Karasu. It's a nice ideal to hold, and I don't have a lot of hope for it myself..." Diavel trailed off, and though his words sounded nice enough on the surface, they hit Karasu like a fist of steel in the abdomen.
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Full party - get
"Hell yeah, you can be my guy too!" Trevon was the one to send the actual party invitation, and Diavel accepted, adding his name, level (3), health and skill points to the list in Karasu's peripheral.
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also a joke because of the phrase "shut up Klein, come back when you're a main character"
"Yeah, you're kind of a celebrity, talk of the town in Shibuya. They call you the Dragon Prince, because of the dojo name, Steel Dragons or whatever. I'm Klein, and it's nice to meetcha!" Klein held out a hand, grinning like a rambunctious family member, and Karasu took the proffered palm, shook it tightly before releasing.
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yes 😁
"Yeah, you're kind of a celebrity, talk of the town in Shibuya. They call you the Dragon Prince, because of the dojo name, Steel Dragons or whatever. I'm Klein, and it's nice to meetcha!" Klein held out a hand, grinning like a rambunctious family member, and Karasu took the proffered palm, shook it tightly before releasing.
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I hadn't even noticed that there were archers. So I think it's alright so long as it is like a subclass, or that they still have blade abilities? That said, I'm a late comer to this story so you might have already taken my ideas under consideration earlier.
ch 0 5 Gathering Allies
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Oh yay! A crossover!
"Hello," Karasu spoke cautiously, unsure what the girl wanted. She had on a massive backpack, and a quite literally wore three weapons at each hip.
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Did it?
"Plus, we'll gain some more levels!" Silica added. "Each of us should get to kill the boss at least once; it resets every time a party enters, right?"
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Now I'm curious...
As for myself, I don't feel I will be squeamish enough to find this thing in particular off-putting enough to not read
ch 38 IMPORTANT QUESTION
Reincarnated as a Hero- and the Wrong Gender?!
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