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First I want to thank you for the chapter. Then to the feedback: Your english improves since the very beginning of this book, but the last 100 or so chapters the improve is really noticeably and this chapter now is one of the best you have ever written. The language is easy to read, easy to understand but complex enough to engage and not to bore. What some other user mentioned is that the chapters are shorter then normally (can a chapter really be to long?) but if this is necessary to improve your writing further then this is a tradeoff I can live with. All in all I really enjoy your book and hope we all can accompany Jiang Fan further on his journey!

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