just note if it is a flashback. it is confusing if you do not..
ch 31 Hiding a Girl
General · MiaoMiao11
she is damons mate i guess. she is prettier than marcy
ch 0 8 Talia
Fantasy · RedSonia
Champaigne
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Fantasy · Violet_167
mental note. you are to never sleep with .your bra on. it can give you breast cancer.
ch 18 Golden Age In Her Hands
Urban · TheIllusionist
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 66 Schedule Changed
General · Elyawriter
I noticed how it is okay for Mime to habe his hands all over Jas and not care. What is up with her parents anyways. All these blind dates with rich men. If I were Ian I would of left her. She has always jumped to conclusion with him but when it comes to her situation he just needs to trust her.
ch 124 Chapter 124
Realistic · wounded_warrior
blonde not blond
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Urban · Bethel-Gold
on .not in his patio
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Urban · Bethel-Gold
businessman not woman
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Urban · Bethel-Gold
after the word woman add be sent to
"Yes. We should let this woman send to the hospital first. As he is taking responsibility for the woman, then we have nothing to say. Isn't it?"A man said.
Urban · XIOANI
add the words have to before the word worry
"I am sorry for the problem I have created. I am going to take full responsibility for this. I will take care of the person. I will take her to the hospital and treat her. You don't worry."James Thomson said in the same deep voice.
Urban · XIOANI
add were to get before the word involved
James Thomson looked around the crowd. He thought for some time. He knew that if the media and police involved in this case, his grandfather would be very angry. He looked at the woman lying down on the ground. She was covered with lots of blood.
Urban · XIOANI
poor people
"Yes. You are correct. We can not let any rich man hurt any poor like that. We should call the media and inform them. Everyone should know how rich man treats the poor."Another man said in an angry voice.
Urban · XIOANI
Look! She is bleeding badly.
"Oh, Poor her! Look how is she bleeding!"James Thomson heard someone's voice from the crowd.
Urban · XIOANI
she not he
"Oh My God! Is he dead?"He mumbled and closed his eyes. He felt his body was shaking.
Urban · XIOANI
take out the word but
"Now what to do? Will I go away? No...…I should help the person whom I hit. But what if he is already dead?Oh My God!Now what?"James Thomson mumbled and opened the car door slowly.
Urban · XIOANI
Take out but. Srart the swntence with It...
"Oh…What...…the ...….."He mumbled and braked the car hard. But it was too late. His car already hit the person.
Urban · XIOANI
I was talking about the underwrite in the bra because that is what most bras women wear
ch 18 Golden Age In Her Hands
The Billionaire's Kept Woman
Urban · TheIllusionist