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ok finished up to the notice about side chap or something about mc being interviewed by rita but i have to say so much of the story seemed missing like i said when it jumped to the pick of champions mc in previous chaps didnt seem to want to join and said so the after the tour when mc is taking Fleur around then jumps to champions pick and mc is chosen and acted like he wanted and knew he would be chosen he was playing the chelo with sweaty palms waiting like he knew he would be picked the harriot was chosen and they start arguing like un movie and mc just makes suggestions and every ones like ok i like that idea and now there are new schools coming from states and japan ok then next chapter they go to some meating that didnt make any sense to me toi much a mess and the reviews for this are like good book loved it what the hell are you guys smoking to understand this book cuz i need some to understand plz let me know

i dont recommend this as it is it jumps a lot they talk about things like they are important but arnt like at the start they talk about a brain potion like we should already know what it is and should care about it and things related to it then there is jumps in writing and out of place chapters like luna comes and asks mc for help on her project and during said chap Fleur is there fighting with Harriot Potter and in next chapter Fleur and her school just get there and then it jumps to the feast were champions are picked like what the hell is this about so much is skipped at random just dont read until this is fixed dont even get me started with him breaking up with Percy's girlfriend Penelope he was dating and she broke up with him becouse Astoria blackmailed her becouse she was cought snogin Bill Weasley who was at Hogwarts for some reason years after graduation and whatever and then Astoria told him he was cought snogin Fleur when drunk and didnt remember the when they are talking after she comes to school for Triwizard and sees him it seems she didnt even know him and what the fuck Harriot and Fleur are fighting and peeps tell them to stop or go snog each other like what am i reading and thus is halfway out of the current chapters so i will read the rest just to try to figure out what the fuck the story this author is trying to tell here with this crap and maybe get some answers to some of this but will end up with more questions probably sigh dont think i have to worry about spoilers as i dont know whats going on anyway so meh get your shit together author and write a actually storyline or something stop jumping all over the place spent more time developing things then it might've been a good read

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translation garbage i dont know what is going on who is talking to who or what they are talking about as its obscure reference or something that didnt translate well so garbage i dont get why they post it with it as unreadable as it is

what makes you so confident great red can't he is the dragon of dreams right so i would think it should be possible same with ophis being infinite dragon but meh she doesn't seem to care about anything other then getting her quiet back but meh just my thoughts on it so meh and a year or more old post so doesn't matter just posting my thoughts anyway

free 5 ⭐ just for the description I will add this to my watching list and will read when there are enough chapters i usually only listen to the audio version on my phone while at work as i don't like trying to remember what was going on when reading the next chapter i listen to too many to keep track of but just the description caught my attention and i don't usually like dark themes so will give it a try later

there is a limit it should make sense like you can't change the name of spells and what not that wouldn't be hp magic you could just call it magic system or something if you just want to make shit up duh like a magic system that transports you into a subspace to teach you magic not a Hogwarts school that's the whole point of using a specific system of magic your using a already specific rule set not just whatever author wants it should be believable that it came from said magic system