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I guess I will finally drop this story it is the author is just going around about. I do not really see the plot here. so boring Good luck next time in capturing my interest author

it's been more than 500 chapters and I still can not figure out the direction the plot is going. Mr writer where are you going with the story ?

ok then it explains it. I understand 👍

well my dear author, when reading I used the vivid descriptions by words provided to cast an imaginary setting for the story. so pardon me if the terms used bothers me . please that is not to say that you are not doing a good job with the story. it was an honest critique😉

I do not know the culture in the universities in your country but I am a bit surprised to know that you wrote that they have uniforms. in my humble suggestion I think more research to be done to help use the appropriate terms to describe scenarios and the university environment. like the use of classrooms, classmate etc. universities worldwide use 1. lecture halls not classrooms 2. course mate not classmate 3. level 2 or second year students not junior year etc as I said I do not know your country practice so this suggestions is only based on my opinion thank you

that will be nice but I also think it is about time lilie stop being naive.

why is the wedding ring only a gift for lilie and not Tristan too? will he not wear a wedding ring too to show that he is also married ?