Danmachi
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TV · The_Crimson_Writer
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TV · The_Crimson_Writer
So happy it isn’t swordsman
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Games · FletcherTheMod
Good story just a little annoying due to there being no change from cannon.
Started good and was great for awhile.However stupid character moves totally destroyed the story later on. Characters that were supposed to be smart just sudebly became dumd.
Amazing story so far!!!😁
So he is just her dog?
door to do*. Also maybe relax a little on the cliches of them immediatly resorting to violence.
Tyr says, "Sorry Man it's not for sale." The man snaps his fingers and several players appear from the crowd around the train and surround him. It's clear what they intend to door.
Games · Lonely_Author
I thought tyre was the leader?
Tempest holds out her hand for a hands shake. One of the group comes running towards Thousand Styles Miles holding a sheet of paper. Thousand Styles Miles read the piece of paper it has the insignia of his company. In the real world, he gets angry when he sees an order mandating the death of six players he has never heard of. First, on the list is the leader of the party a Naga named SKY Ocean Hunter, secondly, a human male named Tyr, a half-giant wizard called Tatiana, a Blood-elf called Lux, an Arkenian called Nineth Immortal, A Soul Guardian called Styx and Frey a gifted Sprite.
Games · Lonely_Author
I loved the start of the story and thought it was a great begging. But, as I continued to read up till the 200th chapters I found myself growing to dislike the Mc. For me he started feeling like a side character with no growth. Also, he is being more passive than anything right now and the fls feel like jerks. They left him all alone as soon as they got to the city basically and everyone just makes fun of him a lot. I am hoping that something changes to where he finally mans up a little a start taking more charge instead of stumbling around following the fls who treat him like air.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree