Eam123

Eam123

3yr

Commented

Phiara... That's a very interesting name OwO

ch 0 2 BUTTERFLY

The Man Whose Eyes Are Red

Fantasy · Wateristubeg

Eam123

3yr

Replied to Eam123

I meant... that the 'cat'...

I went up again, going into my room in order to find out the cat is walking in my bed. My eyes widened, remembering that the dog has a small cut on her arms. I realize that I haven't given her a name yet.

The Man Whose Eyes Are Red

Fantasy · Wateristubeg

Eam123

3yr

Commented

That the small 'cat' OwO just a pointer

I went up again, going into my room in order to find out the cat is walking in my bed. My eyes widened, remembering that the dog has a small cut on her arms. I realize that I haven't given her a name yet.

The Man Whose Eyes Are Red

Fantasy · Wateristubeg

Eam123

3yr

Commented

Very interesting way to start a story OwO Looking forward for more... Chapter 2, here I come!

ch 0 1 ELIZABETH

The Man Whose Eyes Are Red

Fantasy · Wateristubeg

Eam123

3yr

Posted

It's really interesting how you started this whole story and it pulled me in instantly, making me want to keep reading! I love the characters so far, I see no mistakes and very interesting story (even though there's just a few chapters up) I believe that this book will be a great one! Keep up the good work author!

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

What a terrifying first battle ಥ‿ಥ

ch 0 5 A Man Worthy of a Title

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

Wahahhaha 😂 that was unexpected

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

I like how descriptive you are and I love how you made the helper thingy dumb 😂

ch 0 4 Undergeared

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

Very interesting

ch 0 3 A New World

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

I don't really read system type books but this is really interesting OwO

ch 0 2 Beginning

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

...and all 'of' the world's... minor mistake but we all make them so it's fine :3

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

OmO the way you ended the chapter just makes me want to keep reading!

ch 0 1 Harlow Krause

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Commented

O.O this is a very interesting way to start a book, it pulls readers in! Keep up the good work!

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Fantasy · Litaeus

Eam123

3yr

Posted

OmO The way you started your story is just so intriguing and interesting that I couldn't stop turning the page to see what happens next OwO I love the characters already, even though it's just been a few chapters O>O This book is a great one and I recommend it to those who are interested in this kind of genre. Keep up the good work author!

Your Turn to Chase Me, Reborn For Revenge

Urban · xAlexiax

Eam123

3yr

Posted

Just reading the first chappy already sparked my interest. Very interesting way to start a novel! I have to admit... You captured my personality nicely OwO Keep up the good work author! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)