Yom125 - Profile

so far this has been a wonderful and very entertaining series that has kept me very thrilled and enraptured with its story. if I did not already have a main story on here I was reading, this would be at the top of my list to continue to dive into. keep up the wonderful work. Writing Quality - 5/5 - The wring style and quality has been a joy to read. the story pacing has been very nice. Story Development - 5/5 - For the type of story it is meant to be, the story is fast but not too fast for the main characters power progression. wich makes this a delight to read. Character Design - 5/5 - the author has managed to make me care about both the main characters supporting characters and background characters. they all have varying levels of depth that I can't wait to see how they develop and personaly grow. Updating Stability - 5/5 - Giving you 5 stars as I can see that you have been working hard on this. World Background - 5/5 - the background for the world has been wonderfuly crafted and with the teaser included towards the end of free reading letting us know how this world ties into a larger story with their main book. it has me very interested In the world and how things are going to go together into a much larger multiverse. wonderfully done keep up the good work!

This story has been a fun casual read. that would be interesting to see how it develops. im not opposed to the main character ending up being overpowered. just as long as it's not shoved down our throat excessively. wich so far this story has not passed the line into too much. Writing Quality 4/5 - very few real issues that I remember. just a reminder to watch your characters gender. more than a few times I stumbled across a character being accidently genderswapped causing light confusion and having to reread the sentence to make sure I knew what character I was reading about. Story Development - 5/5 - Wonderful pacing of the story, slow enough to build the world, but fast enough that it keeps you interested. Character Design - 4/5 - Characters are interesting and have a little more depth to them then similar story types. my hope is while you grow your main character you continue to develop your side characters and dive them more depth. Update Stability - 3/5 z you will get better with this. I believe in you. World background - 5/5 - love how they have crafted the background in their world and hope they continue to develop it. it really adds to the story when you successfully develop a good background to work with.

this series has been amazing so far. the detailed world. leaving me wanting to know more and more about it. the large amounts of chapters just eating up my tokens and fast passes as I just keep coming back for more. I'm only a little over 300 chapters in and this series has been an awesome read. so looking forward to seeing how the character continues to develop and we get to see more of the world. I would love to see a world map.

love the story and the world op has built. very engaging and makes me want to come back for more each chapter. I cant wait to see how the story develops.

very entertaining. it has had me at the edge of my seat wanting more and more. I love the perspective of it. sci-fi meets medival fantasy and magic blended together perfectly. Looking forward to how the story develops further. Keep up the amazing job!

I greatly enjoy this series. all my fast passes go to seeing how this story progresses and the main character gets stronger. Wording is a little strange in places but forgivable. Greatly enjoy keep up the good work!