chilldude0

1mth

Commented

"Because you look like one! Wait, you are one! But now you are a bloody demon!"

Beyond Respawn: A Gamer's Rebirth

Games · invayne

chilldude0

1mth

Commented

"Now you truly are a Purple Man..."

Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]

Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader

chilldude0

1mth

Commented

I hope you feel better soon

ch 91 Delay

In Marvel as The Hive

Movies · ZeroX0666

chilldude0

1yr

Commented

These is fine😘

Men and Women(Women will still be futanari's when they want):

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Replied to Azrail93

So he doesn't kiss the homies

That changed when Aaron showed up just now. He said he came in person to help out with packing up stuff despite me telling him and the others that they did not have to help since we could easily deal with the preparations for our move.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

chilldude0

1yr

Replied to Bored_GodlyWriter

Where's this from?

-Horns, Tail, and Old Wings(only difference is that they are all red.):

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Replied to Bored_GodlyWriter

Where's this from?

-Appearance:

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Replied to chilldude0

Also few questions: 1. Are going only female, only male, or a mix of two in the harem? 2. Is their going be an futa content? (main character or side) 3. How intense are you planning the sex scene (Like bdsm or more vanilla) 4. Are planning slow down or keep same pace for the story? 5. Are you going to include more thing for African and Arabic culture?

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Posted

I like it so far, standard 18+ plot, with good grammar and decent pacing and descriptions. Though their are not a lot all of characters yet, the main character need be flesh out more and the story need a lot more world building but I believe it will do well or be interesting for awhile.

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Commented

I like that you didn't drag out the boss fights👍

ch 10 Boss Fights Summary

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Commented

Interesting story so far, hope to see it continue

ch 0 4 Figuring Things Out

The Journey of the Ibtala'a

Fantasy · Bored_GodlyWriter

chilldude0

1yr

Commented

I think there should be more character interaction without it the story feels a bit hollow.

Any suggestions on how to improve my writing style are appreciated. I can't promise I'll actually improve with any of your suggestions. But I'll try. Yall should have seen some of my papers I had to write for school, they were never a good grade.

I Reincarnated as Zoro With Zanpakuto

Anime & Comics · Beersman2412

chilldude0

2yr

Replied to SocialHippo

It from dragonball, specifically Dragonball super.

Liam didn't think anything about Lith's character. He was currently using his unique ability [Zone] which let his mind be free of any useless thought and only think of things related to battle. Everything in his vision had turned dark and only Lith was visible to him.