I like the fast releases of new chapters because it gives me something to read whilst bored. The characters have more depth not and I love how you've designed the world background to really revolve around this one character, with the rest being around her. This seems more realistic, but I do wish there was a little more description.
Fantasy · ChrisWritesStuff
The story is quite compelling, but I do hope that we get some more word background in the future! Baxter and Baxton seem quite nice and I'd love to see some more of them.
The stability of the updates is a little inconsistent, but overall, the story seems pretty cool! The development Is a little slow, but |I think this may be used to develop the characters later on.
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I like the fast releases of new chapters because it gives me something to read whilst bored. The characters have more depth not and I love how you've designed the world background to really revolve around this one character, with the rest being around her. This seems more realistic, but I do wish there was a little more description.
Cassanova, Cassabianca and The Unknown Narrator
Fantasy · ChrisWritesStuff