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The MC is purified from the 7 sins.. Makes me wonder what are you creating here? honestly i am not a fan of the “Hero Category” all righteousness and the blind trust.. I mean from all the torture he got in his childhood, i was expecting something “More Dark” not necessarily EVIL but “Anti-Hero” maybe..?

As far i can see.. The MC trust people too much, he should remember the “Voice” words more often, didn’t the “Voice” get betrayed from his friends at the last moment? Hell.. he didn’t even have many but nonetheless he was betrayed.. This Fiona.. i think the author already made a hint in the first chapters that she want a more than a “Maid” job, I hope that she is a spy working for the Duke to watch over Hazel.. and finally sell and betray the “MC”.. that will teach him a “Good lesson” Ahahahaha **: Author great story so far 👌🏻

Sorry but this... I don’t know what to say Ok.. the MC feel guilty because of his disguise? He also feel guilty of the misunderstanding.. so? shouldn’t he focus on clearing his “misunderstandings” with his other disciples? This is a drama novel with a little bit of comedy