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Por qué haces que niñas y niños de 12 años actúen como salidos? Estás bien, necesitas ayuda?
"Maybe, he Bewitched me as well," said Susan, breaking the heavy atmosphere.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
Autor estás abusando excesivamente de este recurso y están pasando de detalles cómicos a una constante muuuuuy pesada
Though, Daphne the pitiful girl was drawing different conclusions. 'Of course it's different. One has a beautiful and influential team Captain who'd give in to your every demand while the other doesn't...'
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
O simplemente no quería a su familia
He wasn't worried about passing the test. He was sure that he would pass the first test. Unless the scanning arrays were broken, him being an awakener was undisputable. What worried him was his Legacy. He didn't know if the Union would register his ability as Rune Wordsmith or they would discover his Legacy. Either way, he felt like he couldn't trust the Union. Not after what happened to his father years ago.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
No tiene ningún sentido. Todos conocen el nombre verdadero de Neph pero no pasa nada, solo con el del MC, Esa es una laguna tremenda en la historia desde casi el principio. Es una buena historia pero cosas como está hace que pierda mucho y cuanto más avanza más afectan estos errores a toda la trama volviendola estupida sin sentido
ch 350 End of the Nightmare
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Ni para nadie capaz de pensar. Cosas del autor
ch 349 Fate
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Porque el autor quería que el arco terminara con los dos matándose y fue lo único que se le ocurrió
ch 343 Soul Conduit
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
The MC can be a bit smart, listen to everything I have to say and then make a decision? Author, using the same cliché of misunderstandings and half-truths to make twists in the story later turns the story that was painted interesting and stupid.
ch 12 Keeping To The Bargain [part 1]
I Shall Cuck Everyone
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
Más drástico que tratar de matarlo continuamente a él y a su madre? Autor por favor un poco más de lógica
As his subordinate, Ezra would rather just call him Bard, but the fact that the head alchemist was supporting the fourth prince could not be made public, else the already agitated Empresses would use drastic measures against him. He wasn't ready for that as he wasn't strong enough, yet.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
No es necesario repetir lo mismo cada vez que te refieres al grupo de pandilleros, escoge un termino u otro
The gang members, or guild members as they are now, all stood with what little luggage they had as they waited for the Cabrera.
Rise Of The Infinite Sovereign
Fantasy · VOID_
Sí, el MC reencarnado se volvió estúpido y comete errores absurdos. que novedoso
No quiero llamar la atención. Acto seguido transmito en vivo. No dejan de sorprenderme todos estos MC que han vivido más de una vida y son imbéciles en todas ellas. Demasiado viven para como actúan
ch 34 Well Rested, Fallout of Streaming
Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
Games · ApexPen
Por qué todavía no entrena el cuerpo, no se suponía que practicaba un manual doble, de espíritu y cuerpo?
The problem is that Aster has yet to start cultivating his body and he still made her feel it a bit, a proof that Aster's physique is monstrous by innate, of course there was the possibility that when he starts doing it, he will jump some realms just like how he reached the spirit opening realm.
The rise of the pervert primordial
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
Te cortan con una espada. No los golpearé demasiado fuerte solo iban a matarme...
If he wanted, Qin Yuan could have turned them into ashes, but he was new here and the concept of killing was still something too much for him.
Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
El autor no sabe que niveles de cultivo le pone al personaje es un lio, dijo que Mia avanzó al primer nivel infierno, luego el mc le dice que si sigue cultivando con el podrá alcanzar el nivel cielo, que es inferior... A ver si se aclara o la historia se volverá muy pesada
ch 16 Alchemy? Formations? Weapons? Sex? I Am The Master Of All
Harem Overlord
Eastern · BlackFlamer
Estás confundiendo los muros con hacer algo que no te gusta solo para que otro deje de molestarte, eso es volverte estúpido no romper ningún muro
A.N.: This interaction says a lot about how far Axel has come from his previous self. The walls are slowly coming down, though only for one person.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster