Idias_Rivers

A Great read indeed.I like the ruthlessness of the mc. Although the harem thing is bad because the mc cannot love the all equally thereby why its an impossible thing in reality. What i hate the most is that you have a mc who says prostitution can be forgotten. .. really? Thats messed up!

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Idias_Rivers

2yr

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cheesy flower picker lines make me want to....Rip and Tear until it is done(Doom Eternal)

ch 14 14. Pamela

Gold Experience(GER) in DC

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Idias_Rivers

2yr

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scene change this, scene change that!. Just leave a paragraph with a line or three dots.... i mean no one is gonna get confused

ch 0 6 6. Aftermath

Gold Experience(GER) in DC

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Idias_Rivers

2yr

Commented

Oh god i hate when 'pov' is mentioned. It ruins the emmerson

ch 0 2 2. Birth

Gold Experience(GER) in DC

Anime & Comics · Hancock_Sama

Idias_Rivers

2yr

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Sorry man, It's just that if dc super heroes catch a bad guy with no way to make sure he/she is locked for good then they just playing a game of tag and the innocent suffer. today joker escaped and killed 10 people before batman caught him. Tomorrow joker escaped and killed 40 people before batman caught him. So thats why killing them is the only way to be a superhero. Maybe only killing those who kill innocent lives and locking up small time criminals who'd be best.

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